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Taceinsensa Whittier-Bacchus by ~RavenC:iconRavenC:



The hair of golden wheat fields
The eyes of burning emeralds
The thin, starved body of a beggar
The mind of gold
And the heart of a diamond

Her face may have been beautiful
Once
Now, it’s cold, hard with unresolved fury.

Her body, tall and thin,
Perhaps could a model make?
If she ever ate

Intelligence of a scholar
She only made it to ninth grade
But she was the brightest of her class

Her heart is made of Diamond
Cold, hard cut, impossible to mar
Hatred was the heat
Persecution was the mold

A flawless diamond was then created
It’s clear, yet the light distorted
So all images inside are hardly defined

Although this stone may not be marred
By such things as sticks and stones
Knifes or hammers
And other weapons
Although this may be

Diamonds can still burn
©2006-2009 ~RavenC
:iconravenc:

Author's Comments

It's a poem discribing a character of mine. Her name is the title, but most people call her Ta-C.

Her first name means 'Silent fire'. she's a sixteen year old arsonist.

Although on the outside, she seems like a cold callous bitch. Not saying she isn't but basically she lost her parents too young, and never had the chance to greive, so her sorrow turned to hate.

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:iconnulesin:
*claps* I like it, I like it a lot. Flows well and the details add a lot. ^^

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And Sheperds we shall be, For Thee my Lord for Thee,
Power hath descended from Thy hand,
So our feet may swiftly carry out Thy command,
And we shall flow a river forth to Thee,
And teeming with souls shall it ever be!
:iconshimaandtempis:
That's such a cool way to describe a character. *claps* And it's a gorgeous poem, too. Love all the diamond imagery, 'specially this: "Cold, hard cut, impossible to mar/Hatred was the heat" So cool!

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My only accomplishment as an artist is I got fanart into Newtype USA's April 2006 issue. But hey, that's works for me.
:iconlostpyrokitten:
^_^ beautiful! I love the jewel references... I've never seen it done so well. You made gem references sound as beautiful as they should. ^_^

"So all images inside are hardly defined" This line was my favorite because it gives me the best connection with her...

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I'm your fiend! Mwahaha! I mean.. Friend.
:iconravenc:
Hee. I couldn't tell if she seemed like a decent person in the poem or not. in reality, she's a bitch.

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:ninjaeat: is the coolist emoicon!

who lit the fuse on your tampon?

(\/)
( . .) ~ <3
c(")(")
:iconravenc:
thanks. I should start a trend. All twenty or so of mine shall get poems! You should try it! XD

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:ninjaeat: is the coolist emoicon!

who lit the fuse on your tampon?

(\/)
( . .) ~ <3
c(")(")
:iconshimaandtempis:
Bwahaha. Yeah, sure, when actual talent in character-making comes my way, I'll wave politely as it passes me by.

But I'd definitely read yours if you keep it up. ^^

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My only accomplishment as an artist is I got fanart into Newtype USA's April 2006 issue. But hey, that's works for me.
:iconravenc:
:XD: I like tempis though.

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:ninjaeat: is the coolist emoicon!

who lit the fuse on your tampon?

(\/)
( . .) ~ <3
c(")(")
:iconravenc:
Thanks sweetie. :hug:

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:ninjaeat: is the coolist emoicon!

who lit the fuse on your tampon?

(\/)
( . .) ~ <3
c(")(")
:iconnulesin:
your very welcome

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And Sheperds we shall be, For Thee my Lord for Thee,
Power hath descended from Thy hand,
So our feet may swiftly carry out Thy command,
And we shall flow a river forth to Thee,
And teeming with souls shall it ever be!

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