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Pen and Paper in my hand by ~RavenC:iconRavenC:



Pen and paper in my hand,
Thoughts begin to pour
Memories of recent things
Burn my mind, scorch my eyes

She wounded me badly,
Months ago, but it seems to be only days
The thought of her still sets
The pins in my chest aflame

The coldness she showed me,
The burning hate she gave,
For a while, I thought, I'd grown immune,
But it's all coming back to me now

Now, she's doing it again,
But now, it's not me
She slashes at my dear friend's heart,
And mine, it withers in the heat.

My eyes fight the tears again,
Wondering if this pain will be shared again
Will that girl slice again?
Will she rip the soul out of another friend?

Now is sit,
Pen and paper in my hand,
Tears burning my eyes,
But chilling my shirt, where they fall
©2006-2009 ~RavenC
:iconravenc:

Author's Comments

Eh. Bad negative mood, for reasons which are described in the poem

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:iconshimaandtempis:
:glomp: Okay, you're now my favorite person on this entire planet. Absolutely lovely poem, I love its flow and how one stanza just flows right into another.

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My only accomplishment as an artist is I got fanart into Newtype USA's April 2006 issue. But hey, that's works for me.
:iconravenc:
Thank you, Shima-chan.

:glomp:

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:ninjaeat: is the coolist emoicon!

who lit the fuse on your tampon?

(\/)
( . .) ~ <3
c(")(")
:iconnulesin:
:hug: yeah no kidding. Really powerful, and its written in a way that it dosen't even have to be refurring to a single person and event. I connected to it also. :hug: I love you and I want to help you with this as much as I can.

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And Sheperds we shall be, For Thee my Lord for Thee,
Power hath descended from Thy hand,
So our feet may swiftly carry out Thy command,
And we shall flow a river forth to Thee,
And teeming with souls shall it ever be!
:iconlostpyrokitten:
^_^ aw... I love the.. emotion you captured.. It really hit home. Thanks.. I really needed that. :hug:

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Love is giving someone the power to destroy you, and trusting that they won't...
:iconravenc:
:hug:

sanku sora-chan.

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:ninjaeat: is the coolist emoicon!

who lit the fuse on your tampon?

(\/)
( . .) ~ <3
c(")(")
:iconravenc:
Don't worry about it. The only help I can see you doing is borrowing my minisword and scaring the shit out of the girl in question, but that wouldn't do too much, would it?

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:ninjaeat: is the coolist emoicon!

who lit the fuse on your tampon?

(\/)
( . .) ~ <3
c(")(")
:iconnulesin:
>.> <.< >.> mmmmm maybe. But it would be fun to watch her run around like a scared little rabiit with her tail bitten off.

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And Sheperds we shall be, For Thee my Lord for Thee,
Power hath descended from Thy hand,
So our feet may swiftly carry out Thy command,
And we shall flow a river forth to Thee,
And teeming with souls shall it ever be!
:iconravenc:
Eh. she just needs some serious therapy, and a buncha other crap. Including actual crap. Hidden between her sheets. XD

--
:ninjaeat: is the coolist emoicon!

who lit the fuse on your tampon?

(\/)
( . .) ~ <3
c(")(")
:iconnulesin:
hmmm thats seems a bit odd really. Therapy with a hemp rope may do the job just as well. BUT deaths never really solved much. So can I at least content myself by simply scaring her towards a shrink?

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And Sheperds we shall be, For Thee my Lord for Thee,
Power hath descended from Thy hand,
So our feet may swiftly carry out Thy command,
And we shall flow a river forth to Thee,
And teeming with souls shall it ever be!

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